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0:00Welcome back to another genre analysis,

0:02where I take some of the top genres in

0:04the marketplace today and do a deep dive

0:06on them based on an in-depth blend of

0:08human and AI analysis uh of actual

0:11bestsellers to break them down scene by

0:13scene to know exactly what tropes it

0:14has, what character archetypes and

0:17worldbuilding elements that it has, and

0:19even a scene by scene plot template

0:21built from essentially kit bashing the

0:22core elements of what these bestsellers

0:24are all doing uh together into into one

0:27template. Today we're covering epic

0:29fantasy, specifically kind of your

0:31standard epic fantasy. There are a bunch

0:33of sub genres within that niche. Uh, but

0:36we're just kind of talking about sort of

0:38high level. What does epic fantasy look

0:40like? So, let's start by looking at the

0:42most common tropes. So, I tend to break

0:44these up by major tropes and common

0:46tropes. The major ones are you are the

0:48ones you'll find in almost every epic

0:50fantasy. And [snorts] the common ones

0:52are more just like sprinkles on top that

0:55you can use them. you you'll find them

0:57in a lot of epic fantasies, but they're

0:59not necessarily required. Uh, and the

1:01first one here under major tropes is the

1:03found family. The protagonist is often

1:05cut off from their biological kin and

1:07must forge unbreakable bonds with a

1:09group of strangers who become their true

1:11family. This is very common. We got what

1:13is probably my favorite trope in the

1:16entire world, the reluctant hero. This

1:18is a protagonist who wants nothing to do

1:19with saving the world, but is forced

1:21into action by circumstances or a moral

1:23obligation they can't ignore. I just I

1:25love when the reluctant hero finally

1:27just be becomes less reluctant and

1:29actually embraces their role. It's like

1:32my favorite moment in so many fantasy

1:35books. It's it's awesome. Uh there's

1:37often a hard magic system where the

1:39magic in this world isn't just a

1:40mysterious sparkles. It has strict

1:42rules, costs, limitations that the

1:43character must learn to navigate

1:45strategically. Now, I will say with this

1:47one, this is the way it is now. uh this

1:50doesn't necessarily this isn't always

1:52the case historically but I am running

1:55these analysis based on what is working

1:57today not on what has worked

1:59historically uh cuz I'm more interested

2:01in knowing like what's going on in the

2:03industry at this exact moment uh then

2:06there's either an evil empire or an

2:07ancient evil unleashed the primary

2:10threat is massive and overwhelming

2:11usually taking the form of a tyrannical

2:13government or dormant dark force that

2:15has returned to destroy everything

2:17there's a mentor figure you all know

2:19what that is. And the questjourney

2:22and um I actually I actually think a

2:25quest epic fantasy is kind of a subgenre

2:28these days and it's actually a little

2:29bit less common in modern times um

2:32because it's just been done so much in

2:34the past. So this is your typical Lord

2:36of the Rings, Sword of Shann um you know

2:39dragon lance type stuff. Um, but there

2:43is still going to be some kind of

2:45journey that the character has to go on

2:47um, both externally and internally. And

2:49then as far as common tropes go, we got

2:52the traveling troop. A character finds

2:53safety or purpose by hiding within a

2:55group of wandering performers. Uh, magic

2:57from the mundane. The author takes a

2:59seemingly normal skill like cooking or

3:01blacksmith blacksmithing and elevates it

3:03to magical status. There's often a

3:05masquerade where characters must wear

3:07disguises or adopt false personas to

3:08infiltrate enemy car territory. There's

3:11often a vengeance quest. Yes, you

3:13definitely see this a lot where your

3:15main character, you know, something

3:16usually happened to their family or or

3:19someone important and they're trying to

3:21avenge that issue. The chosen one is a

3:24very common one or a hidden heritage

3:27where the character has a a heritage

3:30that is beyond the scope of what they

3:33thought it was. There's often

3:34foreshadowing and a check off's gun,

3:36which is where uh significant objects or

3:39skills are introduced early in the

3:40narrative, seemingly unimportant at the

3:42time, only to become the key to victory

3:43in the climax. This is I would go so far

3:46as to say this is not so much a trope as

3:48it is a required part of structure

3:51[laughter]

3:51uh for any genre. Then we have the

3:54fallen city. So you might find a ruins

3:55of a once great civilization. There

3:57might be an arranged marriage involved

3:59somewhere. There might be a hidden

4:00prince. the royal heir is living in

4:02obscurity. Uh you might see a theme of

4:05like the religious zealot versus crisis

4:07of faith, a clash between those who

4:09follow strict religious dogma and those

4:11who are beginning to question the

4:12validity of their gods or leaders. Uh

4:14again, this is epic fantasy. So these

4:16are all like madeup religions, right? We

4:18have the shadow or the tyrant, a

4:20physical embodiment of the antagonist, a

4:22figure who seeks total control and

4:23stands in direct opposition to freedom.

4:25The power of truth versus the safety of

4:27silence. So, characters must decide

4:29whether to speak out against injustice

4:30and risk death or stay silent to survive

4:32a little longer. There might be a

4:34secession crisis. There might be a

4:36redemption arc, another of my favorite

4:38things, uh, favorite tropes. There might

4:41be an evil wizard or witch. Um, going

4:44along with the magic system. It could

4:45be, it's often categorized as forces of

4:48nature, uh, fire, water, earth, or air,

4:51that sort of thing. There's often a

4:52propaganda state. A secretly badass

4:55housewife. Love this one. A character

4:57who appears domestic or submissive is

4:59revealed to have a lethal set of skills

5:01or past life as a warrior. Uh this this

5:03is related to another of my favorite

5:05tropes of all time, which is the uh the

5:07wise fool, where you have a person who's

5:10typically very just like he's he's a

5:12fool. He's he's uh doing doing a lot of

5:15really weird foolish things and no one

5:18takes him seriously or her. And then uh

5:21at some key point you find out that

5:23they're much more involved and skilled

5:27than you gave them credit for. And the

5:28whole fool thing was kind of just a a uh

5:32facade. Love that trope. Then you get

5:34the stoic emotionless figure. A

5:35character buries their emotion to get

5:37the job done acting as a rock for the

5:39group until the pressure finally causes

5:40them to crack. Right? So those are all

5:42of them. I do have deeper breakdowns of

5:45all of these. Um, and uh, if you want to

5:48get your hands on this guide, by the

5:50way, uh, this is actually a a small

5:52booklet that I publish on Amazon for

5:54five bucks. But I actually don't

5:55recommend you get those on Amazon. I

5:57recommend you go to my membership where

5:59you can get all of them at no extra

6:01cost. Uh, they're all there. And then

6:03we've also just integrated these into my

6:05new tool, StoryHacker OS, which allows

6:08you to essentially use AI to help you in

6:10the process of writing a book in any of

6:12these genres. AI works so much better

6:14when you give it structure like this.

6:16So, this is exactly the kind of thing,

6:18and as far as I know, no other AI

6:21software out there has gone through the

6:23trouble of actually creating guides like

6:25this to actually give people something

6:27more useful than just generic plot

6:30templates that don't apply to like 75%

6:33of all genres. So, uh check there's a

6:36link down below if you're interested.

6:37But anyway, let's move on to my favorite

6:39of the process, which is the plot

6:41template. This is where I've gone and

6:42kind of looked at a scene by scene

6:44breakdown of all of the books in well

6:47all of the major bestsellers that I'm

6:48analyzing and sort of kit bashed them

6:51together into a template. So, we start

6:53with chapter one, the ancient wound.

6:55Often with a prologue set in a distant

6:57past or a mythological realm where a

6:59catastrophic event, betrayal, or magical

7:01breaking occurs that will shape the

7:02entire narrative. Yeah, you definitely

7:03see this all the time. And it's called

7:04chapter 1 here, but this is you could

7:06easily make this a prologue. It's

7:07probably most commonly a prologue,

7:09actually. And that just kind of sets up

7:10the world. Uh often doesn't involve the

7:14protagonist directly. It just sort of

7:16gets things going. Then chapter two is

7:18the hidden talent. Introduce the primary

7:20protagonist in their constrained normal

7:22world performing daily duties that

7:23highlight their lower social status or

7:25marginalization. Reveal what the

7:26protagonist possesses that the

7:28protagonist possesses a hidden ability,

7:30secret heritage, or forbidden skill that

7:31they must conceal from authorities under

7:33threat of punishment. Uh then there's

7:34the political an animal. Shift to a

7:36second POV. And that's another thing

7:38about this guide is um we often have

7:42more than one POV here. Um and this

7:46actually makes fantasy really especially

7:48epic fantasy really difficult to target

7:52uh with an analysis like this is because

7:54introducing multiple POVs actually makes

7:57the structure a little bit harder to

7:59track. Um but I've done my best here so

8:02hopefully it works out. So we shift to a

8:04second POV. a politically positioned

8:06character like a noble, diplomat, exile,

8:07or court attendant, navigating an arena

8:10of intrigue in a distant city or court.

8:12Through their eyes, introduce the wider

8:14geopolitical situation, including hints

8:16of foreign threats, religious tensions,

8:17and corrupt leadership. Chapter four is

8:19the veteran's burden. In introduce a

8:21third POV, the veteran or mentor figure

8:24or antagonist aligned character whose

8:26perspective frames the larger conflict.

8:28show them in a position of

8:29responsibility. Perhaps a retired

8:31warrior attending a homestead, a scholar

8:34guarding forbidden knowledge or a zealot

8:36arriving with a hidden agenda. So that's

8:37the kind of stuff we get there. Chapter

8:39five is the impossible demand. So we

8:41return to the p primary protagonist who

8:43is given an impossible task. An

8:45accelerated deadline or a forced

8:47assignment by an authority figure. And

8:48in chapter six, catastrophe sl uh

8:51strikes. So this is your inciting

8:52incident. A sudden devastating event

8:54shatters the protagonist world. ma

8:56massacre at the school or village or

8:57temple, a sudden curse, a betrayal, etc.

9:00There are all kinds of different things

9:01that could happen, but it's a disaster

9:03of some kind. And the political web

9:05titans cut to the political POV who is

9:07dealing with the fallout from the

9:08catastrophe, either witnessing it from a

9:10different angle or hearing the official

9:11sanitized version through propaganda

9:13channels. We get the reluctant mentor.

9:15The protagonist encounters their mentor

9:16figure, either someone known to them who

9:18reveals hidden depths or a stranger who

9:20intervenes at a critical moment. The

9:21mentor confirms that the protagonist

9:23hidden abilities are real and

9:24significant and that the catastrophe was

9:25not random but targeted. Then we get the

9:27refusal and the flight. So the character

9:30the protagonist doesn't like what he's

9:32seeing and he just decides to run away

9:34from it, dig his head in the sand, all

9:36of that. Then that leads to the first

9:39test of survival. The fugitives navigate

9:41hostile terrain, a border town, uh a

9:44smuggler's route, a bandit infested

9:46road, or magically dangerous wilderness.

9:48They encounter their first lethal

9:49challenge uh which could be any number

9:51of things and the protagonist is forced

9:52to use their hidden ability for the

9:54first time in earnest with messy and

9:56dangerous results that leads [snorts] to

9:57the antagonist's move. So shift to the

9:59antagonist POV or the political POV

10:01observing their the antagonist as they

10:04consolidate power following the

10:05catastrophe. The antagonist reveals

10:07their broader strategy uniting factions

10:09through manufactured fear, manipulating

10:11religious authority or seducing

10:13ambitious nobles into a coup. So that's

10:15where we get that. From there we go to

10:17sanctuary among strangers where the

10:19features find temporary refuge and they

10:22reach the point of no return which means

10:24like essentially at this stage they

10:26cannot just go back to the way their

10:27ordinary world was. It is just what it

10:30is. Uh then we have chapter 14 the

10:32political maneuver. So we return to the

10:34political POV who has now infiltrated a

10:36key court council or social circle.

10:38That's important. Um we have the road of

10:40trials. The traveling group moves

10:42through varied terrain each location

10:43revealing a new facet of the world. We

10:45have the training begins. So during an

10:47extended stop at a safe house, ruin or

10:49hidden settlement, the mentor begins

10:51formal training of the protagonist. And

10:53there we get a hidden history. So we

10:56some kind of truth is revealed involving

10:59the past, things that the protagonist

11:01might not have been aware of or had been

11:03lied to his whole life. And there's a

11:05romantic subplot that stirs. So, the

11:07protagonist shares a quiet moment with a

11:09love interest, which could be a fellow

11:11traveler, an ally encountered along the

11:13way, or a longtime companion seen in a

11:15new light. Through conversation, shared

11:16grief, or a small intimate gesture, an

11:18emotional connection deepens beyond

11:19friendship. This is the spark of that.

11:22And then we get to the first pinch

11:23point, which is a major beat where an

11:26elite enemy force, which could be

11:28assassins, supernatural pursuers, or

11:30specialized strike team, locates the

11:31protagonist group and attacks. The

11:33combat reveals the true scope of the

11:34antagonist resources with weapons or

11:37abilities far beyond what the heroes can

11:38match. And then we deal with the

11:40aftermath of that. And moving back to

11:43the political POV, there's an

11:44investigation that deepens there. And we

11:47get the sanctuary of knowledge where the

11:49group arrives at a hidden library, a

11:51magical wellspring or ancient site that

11:53holds keys to understanding the magic

11:55system. And from there, a convergence

11:57approaches. So, the traveling group

11:58nears a major destination like a capital

12:00city, a contested fortress or sacred

12:02site where they will encounter the

12:04political POV storyline and disguises

12:07are dawned, false identities crafted,

12:08and contingency plans laid. Um, so

12:11anyway, this is uh there are actually

12:13quite a few chapters in uh Epic Fantasy,

12:16so I'm not going to go through all of

12:17them, but you kind of get the idea of

12:18how this is all set up. And once again,

12:20you can easily get this guide on Amazon

12:22if you want or via my membership. Um,

12:24but you can kind of see just like the

12:26progression of the the beginning of the

12:28story and how that all works. It

12:30actually epic fantasy tends to meet a

12:33lot of the standard beats for uh all

12:36fiction really. Um, but you can

12:38definitely see a lot of the hero's

12:39journey elements in here and all of

12:41that. Moving on to the standard epic

12:44fantasy characters. These are the

12:45character types that you're most likely

12:47to see. So, we have the reluctant

12:49savior. Of course, this character begins

12:51the story in a status of low status. in

12:53a state of low status, exile or hiding.

12:55Often viewing themselves as powerless,

12:57broken, or merely a survivor trying to

12:59protect a sibling or loved one. Uh we

13:01also have the reactivated warrior or the

13:03retired badass. Uh another favorite

13:05trope of mine that you often see having

13:08to join the fight. And there's a

13:10highborn strategist. This is often the

13:12masked royal. Uh someone who seems to

13:15know a lot more than they're giving on.

13:16The doubting zealot. This is an

13:18ideological antagonist. and the broken

13:21mentor, which could also be the same as

13:23that reactivated warrior. Um, and those

13:26are the common ones. You'll also tend to

13:28find like a love interest and some other

13:30things, but these are like the core ones

13:32that you see in almost every epic

13:33fantasy. And then of course, world

13:35building for epic fantasy is going to be

13:37a really big one. Uh, so we start at a

13:40high level with a central mystery or a

13:41great lie that has been told to this

13:44character their whole life. Uh, there's

13:45usually some kind of post cataclysmic

13:48man, I can't speak today. cataclysmic

13:50status quo. Uh so something happened in

13:53the past that like ruined a whole lot of

13:55things and people are just kind of

13:56coming out of that. Uh there's usually

13:58hard magic mechanics, a physical and

14:01moral cost to using magic. Uh there's

14:03often a connection to geography or

14:05bloodline in that magic system. As far

14:08as settings and locations go, there's a

14:10bastion city, so a great urban location

14:13that serves as a microcosm of the

14:14world's social hierarchy. And you'll

14:16also often see the environmental hazard

14:18or barrier. So incorporate a massive dis

14:21dangerous geographical feature that

14:23dictates travel, trade, or military

14:25strategy such as a supernatural

14:26stormfront. Uh a cursed wasteland or an

14:29impossible mountain range guarded by

14:31monsters. And from here we get the

14:34theocratic or militaristic empire. uh as

14:37as far as population and politics goes,

14:39there's a oppressed magical CA cast

14:42often and there's uh the training

14:45institution or a war band. So, this is a

14:47specific organization or location

14:49dedicated to honing the skills of the

14:51world's warriors or mages. As far as

14:53history and lore goes, there's usually

14:56the something like a resurrection of an

14:57ancient evil or sensient artifacts or

15:00companions. And there's often a schism

15:02of faith under religion and beliefs um

15:05between people who are of a more

15:08conservative uh older religious faith

15:11and people who are rejecting that uh and

15:14so on. Common themes that you'll see in

15:16epic fantasy is the buried truth versus

15:17the convenient lie or blood versus bond

15:20that goes along with the found family

15:22trope or fate versus free will. You'll

15:24definitely see this one a lot. Uh I also

15:26have some notes on writing pros here uh

15:29as well as how a guide to actually write

15:31a book description in this genre. If you

15:33have written one and you want to publish

15:36something uh in in that genre, I have a

15:38guide for that as well. So hopefully

15:40this has been a useful exercise for you

15:42to go through this. And uh I guess I'll

15:44see you in the next video where we cover

15:46another genre just like this one.

15:48Pierce.

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