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0:00How does a show like Rick and Morty pack

0:02the plot of a feature film into a single

0:0422minute episode? How could it feel so

0:06chaotic and random and yet so

0:08emotionally complete? The answer is a

0:10surprisingly simple formula. It's an

0:12eight-step blueprint that the show's

0:13creator, Dan Harmon, uses for literally

0:16every single episode. Hi guys, my name

0:18is Jason. I'm a fantasy author. I spend

0:20way too much time reverse engineering

0:21how my favorite stories work. This

0:23blueprint is called the story circle and

0:25today we're going to break it down step

0:26by step. Once you see it, you'll start

0:28to notice it everywhere. This is part of

0:30my deep dive into all of the major story

0:32structures. So, I'd love to hear in the

0:34comments if there's another one that you

0:36want me to cover. For now, let's get

0:38into the framework that powers some of

0:40the most inventive shows and films out

0:43there. So, Dan Harmon calls this a story

0:45embryo because it contains the essential

0:47DNA of any good narrative. It's broken

0:49down into eight simple logical steps.

0:51Step number one is you, aka the comfort

0:54zone. Firstly, you meet a character in

0:57their zone of comfort. This is their

0:58normal world, their before picture. It

1:01doesn't have to be a happy place, per

1:02se, because we have characters like

1:04Harry Potter, who was miserable in a

1:06cupboard under the stairs, but it is

1:08familiar. We see who they are before the

1:10story messes with them. In Toy Story, we

1:12see Woody enjoying his status as Andy's

1:15favorite toy. This step establishes a

1:18baseline. Step number two is need, aka

1:21the itch. Something happens. The

1:22character develops a need or a want and

1:24this is the inciting incident that kicks

1:26off the story. Woody's world is upended

1:28by the arrival of Buzz Lightyear and now

1:30he needs to get back on top. This want

1:32is the engine of the story. But often

1:34what a character thinks they want isn't

1:36what they truly need. And that gap is

1:39where the best character development

1:40happens. Step number three is go, aka

1:43crossing the threshold. The character

1:45acts on their need and enters an

1:46unfamiliar situation. They cross the

1:48threshold from their normal world into

1:50the unknown. And this is the point of no

1:52return. For instance, when Luke

1:54Skywalker finds his aunt and uncle

1:55murdered, his decision to leave with

1:57Obi-Wan isn't just a choice. His old

1:59life is gone. The protagonist has to be

2:02an active participant here. They have to

2:04choose to go. Now, step four is search,

2:07aka the road of trials. So, now in an

2:09unfamiliar world, the character has to

2:11adapt. This is the search, a series of

2:14escalating trials where they are tested

2:15and forced to learn. Things get

2:17complicated. They stumble. They fail.

2:19They try new things. And this is where

2:21the protagonist gradually starts to

2:23change, even if they don't realize it.

2:24For Woody and Buzz, this is getting

2:26trapped at Sid's house and enduring his

2:28destructive wrath. Now, step number five

2:30is find, aka getting the thing. The

2:33character finds what they were looking

2:34for. They get the thing that they wanted

2:36back in step two. And this is often a

2:38false victory. Luke and Han rescue

2:40Princess Leia, but now they're stuck on

2:41the Death Star. Woody and Buzz finally

2:43bond, but they're still lost. They got

2:46what they wanted, but the story is far

2:47from over. In fact, it just got more

2:49complicated. Now, step number six is

2:51take, aka paying the price. Getting what

2:53they wanted comes at a heavy price. This

2:55is a low point. The dark knight of the

2:57soul. A mentor dies, a plan backfires,

3:00and a terrible truth is revealed.

3:02Obi-Wan sacrifices himself so that

3:04others can't escape. This is where the

3:05character is stripped of their illusions

3:07and forced to confront the true cost of

3:08their journey, and victory always has a

3:11price tag. Now, step number seven is the

3:13return, aka the journey home. The

3:15character starts the journey back to

3:16their familiar world, but they are the

3:18same person who left. They bring what

3:20they found, aka a person, an item, or a

3:22lesson, back across the threshold. And

3:25this return is often a final chase or

3:27escape. In Toy Story, Woody and Buzz use

3:30a rocket to fly back to the moving

3:31truck, finally returning to Andy's room.

3:33Step number eight is change, aka the new

3:36normal. The character returns, but they

3:38have changed. The world around them

3:40might have changed, too. They now exist

3:42in a new changed equilibrium. Woody

3:45learns to share the spotlight and

3:47coexist with Buzz, and Luke has evolved

3:49from a whiny farm boy into a hero of the

3:51rebellion. The character is back where

3:53they started, but the journey has given

3:54that starting point a new meaning. That

3:56change is the entire point. So, where

3:59did this circle come from? In the late

4:01'9s, writer Dan Harmon was struggling to

4:03decode the storytelling process. He was

4:05drawn to Joseph Campbell's famous hero's

4:08journey, the 17stage mono myth that

4:10influenced everything from ancient myths

4:12to Star Wars. But he found it too

4:14complex and academic for the practical

4:16demands of writing for te television,

4:18especially when you consider that

4:20television writers often have to write

4:22very quickly. So he did what any good

4:24writer does. He simplified it. Harmon

4:26boiled Campbell's 17 steps down to a

4:28lean, mean eightstep framework. He

4:31stripped away the mythological language.

4:33So we were out with the atonement with

4:34the father and in with just take. He

4:37visualized it as a circle to represent

4:39the cyclical patterns of life. Uh which

4:41is also consistent with the hero's

4:42journey. And that circle is split in

4:44half. The top half is the world of order

4:46where the character is comfortable and

4:48knows the rules. And the bottom half is

4:50the world of chaos where they are a fish

4:52out of water. The story is a journey

4:54down into chaos and a return to the new

4:56kind of order. And it's not just a

4:57formula Harmon invented but a pattern he

4:59identified and made accessible. Breaking

5:02down stories like this is the key to

5:03writing your own. If you have an idea

5:05but feel overwhelmed by the process of

5:06turning it into a novel, I built

5:08something just for you. It's called

5:10Story Hacker Gold. It's my private

5:12school group where I guide authors

5:13through the entire journey from a blank

5:15page to a finished book in their hands.

5:17And we cover not just the writing, but

5:19all of the tools that you need to market

5:20your book effectively. We even get into

5:22how AI can enhance your process without

5:24compromising your creativity or your

5:26ethics. The group includes weekly live

5:28calls with me, free copies of all my

5:29books for authors, and a community of

5:31writers helping each other succeed. If

5:32you're ready to finally write your book,

5:34the link is in the description, and I

5:35will see you in the next

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