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Claude Finds Out Exactly What Readers Want in My Novels

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0:00In this video, I'm going to show you how

0:02you can create a reader avatar for your

0:04book so you never have to guess what the

0:07reader wants out of the book you're

0:09writing. This includes what kind of

0:10genre are they interested in, what

0:12tropes are their favorites for that

0:14genre, what are their expectations, what

0:16are some of the things they don't want

0:18to see in the book because all of these

0:20are things that readers actually,

0:22whether they know it or not, have an

0:24expectation for. So, we're going to dive

0:26straight into that and get into how you

0:28can set this up so that you would can

0:30avoid quite a lot of mistakes that most

0:33beginner authors run into. So, let's

0:34dive in. So, for this activity, we're

0:37going to actually be using Claude and

0:39specifically Claude Claude Pro, which is

0:41the subscription that I have, the $20

0:43tier. Uh you can probably do this on the

0:44free tier as well, but it's you're

0:46obviously not going to be able to use

0:48the better models for that. And uh there

0:51there's a couple of reasons why we're

0:52using Claude. Claude is actually really

0:53good at the kind of stuff we're looking

0:55for for this particular um activity. You

0:59could do this with other chatbots, but

1:01they wouldn't be quite as good. So, uh

1:04for starters, we're going to come over

1:05here to projects and you'll want to

1:07create a new project. I just called it

1:09reader avatar, as you can see here. If I

1:11click on this, and you'll want to put

1:14some instructions that go something like

1:15this, all right? Now, I'll pause here so

1:17you can pause the video and take a

1:20screenshot if you want so that you can

1:22transcribe that and use it yourself. Uh

1:24but it essentially says, "You are an

1:25expert publisher. Your task is to help

1:27an author understand exactly what the

1:29target reader is looking for. This

1:30primarily has to do with the genre and

1:32trope preferences, but should also

1:33involve other aspects of determining who

1:35your customer avatar is. Start out by

1:37asking a few clarifying questions about

1:39what the author thinks of their target

1:40reader because a lot of authors have an

1:42idea, but uh it may be inaccurate. Then,

1:46do some web searches to clarify what

1:47that type of reader or aspects of the

1:49genre mentioned by the author is like.

1:51Present your findings to the author and

1:52go back and forth with them a bit until

1:54you have have perfect reader avatar that

1:56both A, matches with A author wants,

1:59expects, and has already determined

2:00about the avatar, and B, matches the

2:03research that you perform as well. So,

2:05basically, it's going to be asking you

2:06some questions about what you think your

2:08reader avatar is like, and it's going to

2:10be doing research as well. Now, this is

2:12actually easier for authors than for

2:14people in other types of businesses

2:16because authors already have a very

2:18clear way of determining what A their

2:22readers want, and that is the genre.

2:26Genres and tropes are already sort of

2:28divided by reader preferences. So, if a

2:32reader likes one thing, they'll read

2:34that genre, but they won't necessarily

2:36like another genre. That I hope that

2:38makes sense. So, now that we've got that

2:40instructions in here, you want to come

2:42here to the chat, and before you

2:43actually get started on the chat, make

2:45sure you have a good model that you

2:46like. I'm using Sonnet 4.6 with adaptive

2:49thinking, so it might think more for

2:51certain tasks. And also here on the

2:53left, this little plus icon, click on

2:55that and make sure web search is enabled

2:57because it will need to do some web

2:59search for this process. And so now, uh

3:02my recommendation would be to start with

3:04a general idea of your genre.

3:07So, if you have a specific genre that

3:09you

3:10uh are looking to write, start with that

3:13and put that in there and get your

3:15reader avatar. So, I would say something

3:17like, uh I want to create an avatar for

3:22the ideal reader

3:25uh of let's just say mafia romance.

3:28Since that's a popular one these days in

3:31the romance category. All right. Great

3:33choice. Mafia romance has a hugely

3:35passionate readership. Uh before I dive

3:37in, I want to understand that you

3:38already know or believe about your ideal

3:40reader. Let me start by asking you a few

3:42questions. All right. So, it's going to

3:43give us some questions here. How would

3:45you describe the typical age range for

3:47your target reader? I would say 35 to

3:4950, definitely.

3:51Uh which emotional experience do you

3:52think your reader is primarily changing?

3:55The dark dangerous forbidden thrill, a

3:56powerful protector, safe and dangerous

3:58arms, enemies to lovers tension, the

4:00redemption arc, the villain who loves

4:02only her. I mean, I don't know.

4:05>> [laughter]

4:06>> But I would guess number two.

4:09This may reveal things about myself that

4:11I don't want revealed. How dark do you

4:13believe your ideal reader wants the

4:15content to go? Dark but with limits,

4:18pretty dark, morally great character,

4:20very dark, depends on the subgenre or

4:23I'm not sure. I'm just going to say

4:26pretty dark. All right, and from there

4:28it's going to do some thinking.

4:31It's going to ask me a few more

4:32questions. Where do you think your ideal

4:34reader primarily discovers and buys

4:35books? 100% Kindle Unlimited. That's

4:39no question there. What do you think

4:41your reader's reading life looks like?

4:42They're absolutely voracious. And this

4:45is kind of typical of romance in in

4:48general. Which of these do you think

4:49best describes your reader's day-to-day

4:51life? Busy professional reads as an

4:53escape from high-stress work.

4:55Stay-at-home parent reads during rare

4:57quiet moments, empty nester with more

4:59leisure time. Honestly, I feel like it

5:01could be any of these, so I'm going to

5:03say I honestly don't know.

5:05So now it's going to do a search on the

5:07web and just to learn more about the

5:09mafia romance category and people that

5:11read it. All right, so now it's done

5:14some searching and all right, so here's

5:17what it's got. Where you're spot on,

5:19she's on Kindle Unlimited, she's

5:20voracious, she wants the protector

5:21fantasy. I like how it basically just

5:24assumed this is a female. Like it

5:27In one of my tests I did earlier around

5:29epic fantasy, it was asking me about

5:32like what percentage of male versus

5:34female I thought. And like here it's not

5:37even asking me that question. It just

5:38knows it's all female.

5:40Where the research adds nuance on age.

5:44Largest demographic is actually 25 to

5:4635. Interesting. Um daily life. Many

5:50women are in situations where they are

5:51always busy and pressured to be perfect

5:53and sweet while doing it. Dark romance

5:55is a way to escape that cycle.

5:57She's overwhelmed. Yeah, I could see

5:59some of that. And And keep in mind, this

6:00is not We're not talking about every

6:02reader of this genre, okay? This The

6:05whole idea of creating a reader avatar

6:08or even just a customer avatar in

6:09general for any business is to identify

6:12a single person

6:14that best represents

6:17your target market. Um because when you

6:20market your books to a single person,

6:23that actually tends to bring in more

6:25people than if you tried to be

6:26everything to everyone, right? Uh better

6:29to niche down, create an avatar that

6:31kind of represents your ideal reader

6:34uh in a single person, right? So, all

6:36right. Top tropes. We have like arranged

6:38force marriages, possessive or jealous

6:40MMC, that's uh male main character, age

6:43gap, enemies to lovers, innocence meets

6:45darkness, happily ever after is

6:47non-negotiable.

6:49That's true of pretty much every fantasy

6:52or romance genre, excuse me. If it

6:55doesn't have a happily ever after, it's

6:56usually not a straight-up romance book.

7:00It might be like a women's fiction or

7:03something totally different. Uh draft

7:05reader avatar. So, it gave me few things

7:07about that. Uh now I want to pressure

7:09test this with you before we finalize

7:11it. Take your time with these so I can

7:12now say, "Okay. Uh

7:15yeah, that feels right for age." Uh

7:18research paints her as a busy,

7:19overwhelmed woman using books as her

7:21escape valve. Does that match the reader

7:22you're writing for? Yeah, that sounds

7:26about right.

7:28I don't see a reason to

7:30go against that. Yeah, happily ever

7:32after is absolutely non-negotiable.

7:36So, it's now it's doing a little bit

7:37more research.

7:39Now it's asking me a few more things.

7:40What kind of heroine does the reader

7:42most want to follow? I'd say they don't

7:45want an innocent or naive woman, but

7:47they also don't want someone who's

7:49openly defiant, I wouldn't say.

7:52Um I think the quietly strong with a

7:54spine of steel hidden under a soft

7:55exterior is probably what we're looking

7:57for. Someone that kind of starts out out

8:00of her depth, but by the end of the book

8:02is like has that spine of steel.

8:05All right. Uh what's the flavor of your

8:07mafia world? This shapes the fantasy the

8:09reader is buying into. Uh so yeah, we

8:11could do Italian, Russian Bratva. I've

8:13seen a lot of Bratva ones on Amazon, so

8:16I'm going to select that one. Why am I

8:18looking through mafia romance? It's uh

8:20part of my research for some of the

8:21genre guides that I'm creating, and uh

8:24this is kind of a byproduct of that.

8:26Perfect. I now have everything needed

8:28to build a complete to research-backed

8:30avatar. Let me pull it all together. So

8:31now it's going to create your avatar.

8:34Dangerous Devotion Danny. You're the

8:37ideal reader for your Russian Bratva

8:38romance, okay? So we have age range,

8:41gender is like 99% female. Yep, I

8:44believe that. Uh income, middle upper

8:46middle. Uh primary platform, Kindle

8:48Unlimited. Yeah, that's 100% going to be

8:50the case, I guarantee it. Reading pace,

8:52three to five books a week. Yeah, these

8:54people are voracious. They will get

8:56through these things fast.

8:58Uh this is why I don't buy the whole

9:00thing about uh flooding the market uh

9:03because if there are, first of all,

9:05flooding the market with bad books does

9:06nothing because the only the good ones

9:09really surface.

9:10And uh even if there is an influx of

9:13good books in a genre,

9:15uh these people are reading three to

9:16five books a week in some genres. So,

9:19reading window, late night post 10:00

9:20p.m., okay?

9:21Uh Danny is a busy woman, working

9:23professional parent or both who holds

9:25her life together with visible

9:27competence and invisible effort. Her

9:28days are full of obligations, decisions,

9:30and the pressure to always be composed,

9:32capable, and kind. Reading is not a

9:33hobby, it is her decompression ritual.

9:36After 10:00 p.m., when the house is

9:37quiet, she opens her Kindle and enters a

9:39world where she doesn't have to be in

9:40charge of anything. She is in a stable

9:43ordinary relationship in real life, and

9:44that stability is exactly what gives her

9:46the freedom to enjoy fictional danger

9:47without fear. I don't know if that's

9:50going to be super like if that's going

9:52to be the case all the time. I imagine

9:55there are a lot of people that read

9:56these kind of genres that are not in

9:58stable relationships. Uh and that the

10:01the book kind of acts as a sort of proxy

10:04wish fulfillment. But again, we're not

10:06trying to be everything to everyone

10:08here. We're just picking a single ideal

10:10avatar, but this might be something I

10:12would change uh if I had done a little

10:15bit more research into the genre and the

10:17readers of it myself, but who knows. Uh

10:19what she's really chasing is the core

10:21fantasy, the secondary payoff, her

10:23heroine expectations.

10:26Danny wants to be the heroine, so it

10:28must feel aspirational, but

10:30uh recognizable. Yep. Uh here are some

10:32of the tropes. The must-have are the

10:34ones This is what why I chose Claude to

10:36do this instead of any of the others

10:37because

10:38uh lately Claude's been doing all of

10:40these like uh different ways of

10:44formatting that look really cool. So now

10:46this You can't really see it that well,

10:48but you can see this is like slightly

10:50purple. Uh these are the core

10:53tropes, the must-haves, and the the pink

10:56ones are the the bonus ones, the loves.

10:59So the core ones would be like a forced

11:01or arranged marriage, possessive male

11:03main character, happily ever after, ice

11:05to fire arc, morally gray hero,

11:07protective obsession. I would add um

11:11uh touch her and die to that from what

11:14I've uh researched. Uh which is a fun

11:17one, and then uh bonuses are age gap,

11:19enemies to lovers. Enemies to lovers is

11:21almost a given.

11:23Uh but not necessarily a requirement. Uh

11:27dub con, hateful care, forbidden worlds

11:29apart, slow burn tension, jealousy

11:31scenes, savage to all soft for her. And

11:35and then here's a bit about the Russian

11:38Bratva specifically. And what will make

11:41her one star your book? This is I think

11:43really important. I've got this with my

11:46other tests as well. This is the stuff

11:48you do not want to have in your book or

11:50it will lead to problems. You'll get a

11:52lot of bad reviews. Like no happily ever

11:54after or an ambiguous ending. Romance

11:56readers generally hate that. Cheating.

12:00The male main character especially.

12:02A hero who feels genuinely cruel, a weak

12:04weak being passive heroine, cliffhanger

12:06with no resolution. I in my research

12:09that I've been doing lately, I see a lot

12:11of romance books actually put in the

12:12book description saying this book has no

12:15cliffhanger.

12:16So I guess romance writers really don't

12:19want cliffhangers. And then dark themes

12:20without emotional payoff. All right. How

12:22she discovers and talks about the books,

12:24the one sentence pitch to her, he

12:26destroys everything he touches except

12:27her. She's the one thing the Bratva's

12:29most feared man refuses to let go.

12:30Sounds like a good pitch to me.

12:32And that's it. So now you've got this

12:35pretty awesome reader avatar and you can

12:37maybe take it a little bit further if

12:38you want. But I actually think this is a

12:41fantastic way to not only understand

12:43your reader, but to understand your

12:45genre and the tropes that people are

12:46expecting. So I strongly recommend a

12:49technique like this if you're

12:50interested. And

12:53yeah, so we'll take it from there. So if

12:54you like this, I would invite you to

12:58check out my story group called Story

13:01Hacker AI

13:03here on school.

13:04And this group is fantastic. We just

13:06wrapped up doing a book in the month

13:09challenge where a lot of people actually

13:10finished their book in a month and it

13:11was you know, we're talking actual

13:13quality books that match their vision

13:15without all the burnout. And if you want

13:18to learn how you can leverage AI to do

13:20that and actually, you know, make sure

13:23that it's yours and doesn't compromise

13:26your creativity or your ethics, be sure

13:28to check out that out at the link down

13:30below. Uh you'll get all this stuff here

13:32in the classroom that you can see here.

13:34And uh there's just a whole lot in here

13:37including uh the tool that I am working

13:40on. Uh members here get early access to

13:42that tool. Uh so go check that out and

13:44I'll see you in the next video.

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