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0:00Hello, welcome to season 1 of Story

0:01Chef, where we dive into different

0:03genres and discover what makes them

0:05tick. Today, we're talking about how to

0:07write cozy science fiction. And if

0:09you're unfamiliar with this series, I've

0:11gone and used AI to do a huge analysis

0:13of multiple bestsellers in over 200

0:15genres that I've identified through

0:17hours and hours of Amazon research.

0:20Actually going through scene by scene to

0:22identify all the tropes used, the

0:24overall flow of the plot, the character

0:26archetypes, and much more.

0:28Now, this is a lot more than just going

0:30through Chat GPT and asking like what

0:32tropes are in this genre because it

0:34could hallucinate those or get things

0:36wrong or the genre trends might be so

0:38new that it might not even know what

0:41what they are. And when I do it this way

0:43through an actual analysis of actual

0:45books, we're getting far more accurate

0:47data. So, with that in mind, let's dive

0:49into cozy science fiction. So, this is a

0:52fairly niche genre, but it's one that I

0:54decided to do because it was one I was

0:57interested in potentially writing. Uh

0:59so, let's start with the tropes, the

1:01major tropes of this genre. And the

1:04number one here is found family.

1:06Strangers with nothing in common are

1:07thrown together by circumstance and

1:09ending up forming a bond tighter than

1:12blood. The next major trope is fish out

1:15of water. The protagonist is usually

1:16thrust into a confusing futuristic

1:18environment using their lack of

1:19knowledge as a vehicle of humor and

1:20audience. Uh I found this to be true

1:23often for especially for a lot of the

1:25examples that I analyzed. Although, I

1:27think a lot of the times you can just

1:29have a more slice-of-life thing where

1:31the the character isn't so much a fish

1:33out of water as it is just like we're

1:35just following someone around. Uh AI

1:38robots as complex characters. Uh the

1:41ship's computer or local droid isn't

1:42just a tool, but a fully realized

1:44character with sass, emotions, and

1:45agencies. Definitely true from the ones

1:47I looked at. Uh practical skills and

1:49MacGyvering. While the tech is advanced,

1:51the problems are often solved by a

1:53protagonist using simple hands-on common

1:55sense or primitive skills. Personal

1:57stakes and emotional intimacy. We aren't

1:59trying to stop the Death Star here. We

2:01are trying to fix a relationship or find

2:03a place to belong. Again, that kind of

2:04goes into the slice-of-life thing or

2:06just because this is cozy, we're not

2:08having galactic stakes here. We We're

2:11It's more just about the characters, the

2:13relationships, that kind of thing.

2:14World-building, used future, and cozy

2:17spaces. The setting should feel lived in

2:18and comfortable, focusing on the

2:20maintenance of a home rather than the

2:22sterility of a laboratory. And this is

2:25probably one of the more important

2:26things. Um for me personally, I find the

2:30the vibe of cozy sci-fi uh in my mind, I

2:34sort of imagine that as the Enterprise

2:36D, uh aka the Next Generation, Star Trek

2:39the Next Generation. Um Now, I wouldn't

2:42say all of that show would would

2:44classify would be categorized as cozy

2:47sci-fi, but it's definitely very similar

2:51to that. You know, there's carpets,

2:53everything's cushion, and it kind of has

2:55a nice homey feel. That's kind of how I

2:58imagine cozy sci-fi. Although certainly

3:00there would be endless variations of of

3:03that kind of vibe that we could be going

3:05for. Low conflict, uh gentle problem

3:08resolution. So, problems are solved

3:10through communication, empathy, and

3:11cleverness rather than violence or

3:12aggression. And the character arcs are

3:14usually from outsider to integrated

3:15member. Again, this kind of goes for

3:18your typical story, but not for a

3:20slice-of-life story. The journey also

3:22almost always involves a lonely or

3:23cynical character finding their specific

3:25way place within a community. Uh all

3:27right, and those are like the major

3:29tropes, right? So, I also have more

3:31common tropes that you might find, but

3:33aren't necessarily required. Uh we got

3:35blind dates, bad dates from hell. The

3:38protagonist navigates a series of

3:39disastrous social encounters,

3:40highlighting the absurdity of dating in

3:42the future. So, that's definitely one

3:44fits in that slice-of-life kind of

3:46thing. Opposites attract, you can take

3:47two characters with vastly different

3:49backgrounds or species and forcing them

3:51to interact until they realize they

3:52complement one another. I think this is

3:54a great I mean that that kind of

3:57opposites attract trope is useful in any

3:59genre, but works specifically well for

4:02science fiction, I think. The retired

4:03badass, a character appearing to be a

4:05boring old shopkeeper keeper or pilot,

4:08but is revealed to have a highly

4:09dangerous set of skills that they laid

4:11down long ago. I really like this one.

4:14Um this is the kind of thing I

4:16These This is one of my favorite tropes

4:18just generally. Uh marriage of

4:20convenience, two characters getting

4:22hitched for logistical reasons, but

4:23arrangement is driven by genuine

4:25spontaneity and eventual love rather

4:26than cold strategy. The matchmaker AI,

4:29an artificial intelligence, decides it

4:31knows better than the humans and quietly

4:32manipulates events to bring a couple

4:34together.

4:35We have [snorts] the grumpy sunshine

4:36dynamic. This is a classic pairing with

4:39a cynical pessimist is partnered with a

4:40relentless optimist. The narrative

4:42framing device, um the story is told or

4:45supplemented by an AI that acts as a

4:47translator for the reader.

4:49We have time dilation, the characters

4:50deal with the melancholy reality of

4:52relativistic travel, often finding

4:54themselves stranded in a future where

4:56everyone they knew was gone. It might be

4:57a little dark for cozy sci-fi, um but

5:00could be an added element. Technological

5:03disparity, the narrative highlights the

5:04stark contrast between primitive Earth

5:07habits and the advanced bureaucratic

5:09tech of aliens.

5:10>> [snorts]

5:10>> We have the impostor or hidden identity,

5:12the character is terrified that their

5:13lack of credentials or true identity

5:15will be discovered by their new friends.

5:17Um as so as a spin-off of found family,

5:20you often have a adopted child or ward.

5:23And some of these others are just not so

5:25much tropes as they are just literary

5:27techniques like Chekhov's gun,

5:29foreshadowing. We got witness

5:31protection,

5:32um

5:33refuge in audacity scam becoming real,

5:36ensemble cast with diverse

5:38representation. That's definitely a big

5:40one. Uh slow burn romance, so if this is

5:43a cozy sci-fi that has romance, not all

5:45of them do, but cozies often have a

5:47layer of romance in them. Slow burns is

5:50a good way to go. Comfort, self-care,

5:52and wellness. The narrative pauses to

5:54explicitly focus on the characters

5:55resting, eating good food, and taking

5:57care of their mental health, which I

5:59think is great for sci-fi fiction

6:00because in our current world, technology

6:04is often a source of anxiety, and I I

6:07like the contrast of showing a future

6:10where technology is a source of

6:13rest and mental health. Or at least it's

6:15the setting for that. All right, so

6:17those are the major and common tropes. I

6:19do have more fleshed out explanations on

6:21each one of these, and this by the way

6:23is we're essentially looking at the book

6:26that I wrote on this, which you can get

6:27on Amazon,

6:29but I also have them at no extra charge

6:31inside of my membership, which

6:34and we also just announced my new Story

6:36Hacker OS, and this genre is included in

6:39that Story Hacker OS tool so that you

6:42can actually use this to write your own

6:44books in this in this genre.

6:47So, go check that out if you're

6:49interested. Now, my favorite is the plot

6:52template that we developed by kind of

6:54kitbashing what all of these bestsellers

6:57in the genre are doing into a single

6:59plot template. And this goes literally

7:02chapter by chapter. We've got 24

7:04chapters. So, it starts with chapter

7:06one, the mundane grind, which is

7:08essentially the protagonist is

7:09introduced in the middle of their

7:10ordinary working-class routine,

7:12demonstrating their specialized

7:13practical skill. And so, that's kind of

7:16what we'd see here. Cracks in the

7:17routine, so the protagonist tackles a

7:19more challenging version of their normal

7:21work. So, it's like an unusual day,

7:23right? Then there's some sort of

7:25disruption that happens. While in the

7:27middle of a mechanical task or routine

7:29errand, the protagonist are abruptly

7:31swept up by an overwhelming external

7:33force, whether through abduction,

7:35environmental catastrophe, forced

7:36relocation, or being trapped on a

7:37malfunctioning vessel that takes them

7:39somewhere unfamiliar.

7:40So,

7:42you know, something happens. Uh, and

7:44then they encounter strange new faces.

7:46The protagonist begin navigating the

7:47social landscape of their new

7:48environment, forming a tentative

7:50alliance with a knowledgeable local. Uh,

7:52so, uh, this is the kind of thing that

7:54happens next, which is, uh, they

7:57encounter some new characters are

7:59introduced. Uh, cramped quarters. So,

8:01they'll be displaced and things might be

8:03a little uncomfortable at first, but of

8:05course this is a this is a cozy, so that

8:07only goes so far. And then they fully

8:09cross the threshold. The protagonist

8:11achieve their first significant

8:12professional victory in the new setting,

8:14applying their unconventional skills to

8:16a problem the locals had considered

8:17impossible or too tedious. This is what

8:19in my book the plot module we refer to

8:22as earning respect. And, uh, chapter

8:25seven is about the wider world. So,

8:28we've kind of crossed the threshold, but

8:30this is the point where we kind of get

8:32to see like how big is this world, um,

8:34that they've entered into. They get to

8:36to see more of it, and they start

8:38building a home. Because this is a cozy,

8:40home is sort of important. So, they they

8:42become a little bit more, uh, settled in

8:45this new environment that they're in.

8:47They might develop romantic feelings

8:50between the protagonist and the love

8:51interest. Uh, there might be a a quiet

8:53intimate moment of bonding over shared

8:56media, food, or cultural exchange, that

8:58sort of thing.

8:59Uh, but there might be a sidekick, and

9:01that sidekick might get lonely. Um, this

9:03is this is one of those chapters that

9:05kind of like goes off and talks about

9:06different characters that you might

9:08have. By the way, none of this is set in

9:09stone, you can absolutely modify this.

9:11In my tool, in my tool that we developed

9:13Story Hacker OS, we have the ability to

9:15modify any of these templates to your

9:18heart's desire. But then there's a new

9:19character in distress that arrives in

9:21the protagonist orbit, whether through a

9:23damaged vessel, a desperate plea for

9:25help, or being found hiding within the

9:26infrastructure. And there's also a

9:28saboteur. So, just as the protagonist

9:30new life begins to feel stable, an

9:32external threat strikes their home,

9:33business, or community in the form of

9:34sabotage, vandalism, or hostile

9:36intervention. Um,

9:38and again, this is cozy, so these are

9:39not world-shattering things that happen.

9:41It's just a disruption to the everyday.

9:44And there's some kind of devastating

9:46truth. So, the protagonist performs a

9:48routine task with ease, demonstrating

9:49mastery of their new circumstances.

9:52Um however, a casual conversation, an

9:54overheard transmission, or a delivered

9:55piece of news reveals a devastating

9:57truth about the nature of their

9:58displacement. Their home is gone, time

10:00has passed beyond recovery, the physical

10:02changes to their bodies are permanent,

10:03or returning has become categorically

10:05impossible. Stuff like that. Uh then

10:07they process the loss. So, in the

10:08aftermath of the devastating revelation,

10:10the character processes their new

10:11reality in distinctly different ways.

10:13So, there's a number of ways that that

10:15could go. Uh but then they double down

10:16on the life that they are in. So,

10:18they're they're fully committed. This is

10:19kind of the uh the midpoint, you could

10:21call it, of the story, where they double

10:24down on the life that they are in. And

10:25then the investigation deepens. So, now

10:27that they are committed, they look into

10:29some of these issues that have been

10:30going on. And from here, there's an

10:32expansion and allies. So, they travel to

10:35neighboring communities or

10:37neighboring station or market to expand

10:38their network, market their services, or

10:40gather supplies, putting their new

10:42business model to the real test. Their

10:43efforts are largely successful, but also

10:45reveal additional layers of the

10:46setting's social and political

10:47complexity, etc.

10:49Uh the antagonist strikes is after that.

10:52So, the antagonist strikes directly at

10:54the protagonist's newly built life,

10:56targeting their home, business, found

10:57family, or vulnerable newcomer in the

10:59calculated acts of intimidation or harm.

11:02The attack is more personal and

11:03devastating than the earlier sabotage,

11:05threatening the foundations of

11:06everything the protagonist has built.

11:07Once again, this is more on a personal

11:10stakes and less so about um about

11:13anything like uh

11:15universe-shattering. But there is an all

11:16is lost moment, as there is in pretty as

11:18there is in pretty much every book. Um

11:21where the protagonist faces what appears

11:24to be a complete unraveling of their new

11:25life. So, things are not going well. But

11:27then there's some kind of truth reveals

11:29revealed. Protagonist discovers the

11:31truth behind the apparent betrayal. So,

11:33they're just digging into that a little

11:34bit more. Then there's setting the trap.

11:36So, they're starting to put a plan into

11:38motion to overcome the antagonist, which

11:40leads to the climax. The plan unfolds in

11:42a high-stakes confrontation where the

11:44protagonist applies their practical

11:46mundane skills against the antagonist's

11:47sophisticated resources, turning the

11:49environment itself into a weapon or

11:50trap. The conflict involves engineering,

11:52environmental hazards, clever

11:54misdirection, or defensive technology

11:55rather than direct lethal force cuz

11:57again, this is a cozy, keeping the

11:58resolution in line with the cozy tone.

12:00Right? And then there's some aftermath.

12:02The dust settles, right? Antagonist is

12:04neutralized or exposed or brought to

12:07justice. And then there's the lifelong

12:09commitment. Amidst the relief and

12:11celebration, the protagonist makes a

12:12life-long commitment to the love

12:14interest using a humble symbol drawn

12:15from their shared journey rather than

12:17something extravagant. The The team

12:19receives substantial rewards, etc. And

12:22they essentially settle into their new

12:24routine, which is the final chapter. The

12:26story concludes with a ceremonial

12:27gathering, communal celebration, or

12:29shared meal that brings together every

12:31ally encountered through the journey,

12:32reinforcing the theme of community and

12:34found family. Okay? So, really settling

12:36into that cozy vibe, right? So, that's

12:38the the general plot. Now, I do have uh

12:41information inside the book about like

12:43how that would change if you're writing

12:44a sequel cuz obviously some things like

12:47the character already understands the

12:49the the world that they're in and

12:51everything. So, what changes, what stays

12:52the same, that sort of thing. And then

12:54we have the characters. So, these are

12:56like the character archetypes or the

12:57character types. So, we have a competent

13:00outsider is your typical main uh

13:03protagonist. Uh you have the guarded

13:05protector, which is the deuteragonist or

13:07the love interest or both. Uh starts as

13:10a rigid, grumpy, or intimidating figure

13:12with a dangerous background who has

13:14built emotional walls to protect

13:16themselves from past trauma. I love the

13:17grumpy sunshine trope, by the way. Uh

13:19it's such a fun one to play with.

13:21Initially, they view the protagonist as

13:23a nuisance, a liability, or a job to be

13:24managed, treating in with suspicion or

13:27professional distance. However, they are

13:28gradually disarmed by the protagonist's

13:30vulnerability and unorthodox competence.

13:34Uh we've got information about their

13:35heart's desire, their character flaw,

13:37character demographics, etc. We have a

13:40vulnerable catalyst. So, this is be be

13:42like a side character or a ward. Uh this

13:45could be the adopted character

13:47potentially. We have the benevolent

13:49manipulator. This could be a mentor or

13:51potentially even an AI or robot figure.

13:53Uh this character is usually a fixture

13:55of the setting itself, such as a

13:56sentient spaceship, a station authority,

13:58or an ancient AI. So, it could be

14:00something like that. Um

14:01the system systemic antagonist. This

14:04character represents the cold, unfeeling

14:06nature of the universe or the

14:07bureaucracy that the protagonist are

14:09fleeing from. They act as an

14:10administrator, a corrupt captain, or a

14:12corporate functionary who prioritizes

14:15efficient profit or efficiency, profit,

14:17or rigid law over human empathy and cozy

14:20values. They do not typically have a

14:22redemption arc. Instead, they serve as a

14:23foil to the protagonist's practical

14:25humanity. Their arc ends in downfall

14:27often via public exposure, arrest, or

14:29poetic justice, clearing the way for the

14:31protagonist to live in peace. All right.

14:33Uh last but not least, let's talk a

14:35little bit about the world building for

14:37cozy sci-fi,

14:38uh which I have also have in this book.

14:40So, high-level, we've got the

14:41containment scale. So, in this genre,

14:43you must establish a specific, usually

14:45enclosed scope for your narrative, such

14:48as a single space station, a colony

14:50ship, or a small planetary outpost

14:52rather than a galaxy-spanning empire.

14:54So, that's very important for cozy.

14:56Like, we're kind of keeping the the

14:59scale of the setting very very closed. I

15:02like the idea of like a space station or

15:04colony ship personally. Uh makes it

15:06really feel like a place that you could

15:08settle down and it could be like a home.

15:11Uh there is a used future aesthetic. I

15:13would add to this that not just used, so

15:16not used in this sort of Star Wars-y

15:18grungy sense, but used in the sense of

15:21like a home, right? Should feel lived

15:24in, worn, and repurposed avoiding the

15:26pristine sterile white hallways of

15:28traditional space opera. So definitely

15:29avoid the sterile white hallways type of

15:31thing. But I also wouldn't go too far

15:34the opposite way where everything's like

15:36dark and gritty.

15:37But grounded home type stuff definitely.

15:40We have the community hub. So you need

15:43to design a central gathering spaces. So

15:45like a pub, a mess hall, market specific

15:50bar or diner. Definitely you want some

15:52kind of social gathering place

15:55involved in this. And domestic spaces,

15:57of course. And once again, I keep

15:58thinking of the USS Enterprise from the

16:01next generation

16:02had really home feeling domestic spaces

16:06for all of its main characters. So your

16:08world building must pay attention

16:09special attention to the private

16:10quarters and living arrangements of your

16:12protagonist as making a home is

16:13essential theme of the genre. Okay? And

16:15then we got technology. So mundane

16:18infallible tech, stuff that can just you

16:20know,

16:20get messed up and needs replacing. You

16:22got to think like car mechanic type

16:24thing. And personified and artificial

16:27intelligence usually plays a big role in

16:28this genre as well. As far as groups and

16:31races, we do have the alien neighbor.

16:33Neighbor, you should populate your world

16:35with diverse alien species who function

16:36as co-workers. I don't know if this is

16:38required,

16:39but certainly depending on the type of

16:43cozy that you're doing, having having

16:45like friendly aliens I think would be

16:48very useful.

16:49As well as class and vocation

16:51hierarchies. So you should clearly

16:52delineate the social stratifications

16:54based on profession, wealth, or species.

16:56Often contrasting high-rent diplomat

16:58zones with low-rent maintenance decks

17:00type of thing. Although I wouldn't go

17:02too far in terms of like wealth

17:05disparity because that kind of brings it

17:07out of the cozy

17:09thing as well.

17:11This is this is an optimistic future

17:13that we're looking at. But there There

17:15going to be some kind of incompetent

17:16bureaucracy and found family units. As

17:19far as culture and daily life, we got

17:21food and hospitality, so you must build

17:23a robust culture around the production,

17:24preparation, and consumption of food.

17:26This apparently seems to be a big deal

17:28with cozies.

17:29Um and then there's the economy of

17:30scarcity and hustle. Characters in your

17:32world are rarely post-scarcity utopians.

17:35Although there is some of that, they are

17:36usually motivated by debt, keeping the

17:38lights on, or saving for a modest dream.

17:40So like stuff we would be interested in,

17:43you know?

17:44Um And that's pretty much it. So we've

17:46got other information here inside of the

17:48book uh regarding to like themes and uh

17:51some notes on writing prose in this

17:53genre. I also have a template here for

17:56marketing considerations, like what do

17:58you title this thing? Uh what does your

18:00book description look like? We have a

18:02template for that. And like I mentioned,

18:05uh we have our own proprietary software

18:08over at Story Hacker now, uh where you

18:10can actually write a book with these

18:12genres as your templates. So go check

18:14that out at the link down below, and I

18:16will see you in the next video.

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