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Intro
0:00today we're talking about storytelling
0:01if you want your content to perform
0:03better you need to learn how to tell
0:04better stories so in this video I'm
0:06going to walk through my six favorite
0:08storytelling techniques that will
0:10massively improve your content after
0:12watching this I guarantee you will think
0:14differently about the way you write
0:15scripts and make videos by the way I'm
0:17Callaway I've pulled over a billion
0:19views on short form video I've got
0:20500,000 followers and I think about this
0:22stuff all the time all right let's dive
The Dance (Inspired by SouthPark)
0:24in tip number one is what I call the
0:25dance all great stories are like a dance
0:28between context and conflict you give a
0:31little context the characters on a
0:32mission they're doing something and then
0:34oh oh no here comes a conflict you give
0:36a little bit more context the characters
0:37have solved that first conflict they're
0:39on their way and then oh oh no another
0:41conflict this dance is how you keep the
0:43viewer locked in it could be a feature
0:45film or a short form video the dance is
0:47always there now why does this work
0:49conflicts create open Loops in the brain
0:52and then context helps close those Loops
0:54the best explanation I've ever seen for
0:56how to tactically implement this dance
0:58idea is from Matt Stone and Trey Parker
1:00they're the ones who created South Park
1:02they were giving a talk at NYU watch
1:03this we found out this really simple
1:05rule that maybe you guys have all heard
1:07before but it took us a long time to
1:09learn it but we can take these beats
1:12which are basically the Beats of your
1:13outline and if the words and then belong
1:18between those beats you're basically you
1:21got you got something pretty boring what
1:23should happen between every beat that
1:25you've written down is either the word
1:27therefore or but right so so what I'm
1:31saying is that you come up with an idea
1:32and it's like okay this happens right
1:35and then this happens no no no it should
1:37be this happens and therefore this
1:40happens but this happens therefore this
1:43happens and that as soon as we are able
1:45to and literally sometimes we'll we'll
1:47write it out to make sure we're doing it
1:49U we'll we'll have our beats and we'll
1:51say okay this happened but then this
1:53happens and that affects this and that
1:55does to that and that's why you get a
1:57show that feels like okay this to that
1:58to this to that but this here's the
2:00complication to that so tactically it's
2:03as simple as using the words but and
2:05therefore consistently throughout your
2:07script that will create those open
2:09conflict Loops if you're using the words
2:11and then it'll feel like you're piling
2:13on detail after detail after detail and
2:15the viewer will lose interest now let's
2:17quickly take a look at one of my best
2:18performing videos you'll notice there
2:19are four but then conflict Loops in the
2:23first 30 seconds watch this something
2:25crazy is happening with Stanley Cups you
2:27ever seen one of these Stanley Cups
2:29Stanley Cups Stanley Cup racking up 6.7
2:31billion views this 40 o Stanley quencher
2:33has become the Louis Vuitton of drink
2:35wear it's a status symbol new releases
2:37are selling out in seconds people are
2:39flipping them for hundreds on eBay
2:41Stanley the company 10x its Revenue in 4
2:44years off this single product but the
2:46real question is how' they do it how did
2:48Stanley Cups go from a construction
2:49worker's thermos to the dream Christmas
2:51gift I got a
2:53Stanley it's a wild story so in 2019
2:56Stanley was actually about to
2:57discontinue the cup but this group of
2:59mom block loggers the buy guide knew
3:01they were making a huge mistake so they
3:03cut a special affiliate deal with
3:04Stanley to bulk order 5,000 cups with a
3:07Twist Stanley had to make them pastel
3:09colors those 5,000 cups sold out in 5
3:12days and completely Chang their
3:13philosophy on design but it gets even
3:15better a few months ago Stanley had the
3:17burning car moment so I'm consistently
3:19setting up these head fakes to keep the
3:20storyline moving use this but then
3:22framework next time you're Ting a script
3:23I guarantee it'll uplevel that video all
3:25right tip number two is rhythm I talk
Rhythm (Inspired by Gary Provost)
3:27about this a lot but there's this
3:28natural subconscious pacing and Rhythm
3:31that is soothing to the brain you can
3:33hear in my delivery I'm pretty decent
3:34with this like natural EB and flow the
3:37rhythm of the syllables when I talk is
3:39soothing to listen to now I used to be a
3:41rapper and I was a drummer Growing Up So
3:43this pacing and rhythm is kind of
3:44embedded in me which I think is why I'm
3:47naturally good at talking in this way
3:49but I do have this tactical way that can
3:51improve anyone else at Rhythm take a
3:53look at this image which was written by
3:54the legendary author Gary Provost now
3:57listen as I read this this sentence has
3:59five words here are five more words
4:01five-word sentences are fine but several
4:03together become monotonous listen to
4:04what is happening this writing is
4:06getting boring the sound of it drones
4:08it's like a stuck record the ear demands
4:10some variety now listen I vary the
4:12sentence length and I create music music
4:15the writing sings it has a pleasant
4:17Rhythm a lilt a Harmony I use short
4:19sentences and I use sentences of medium
4:21length and sometimes when I'm certain
4:23the reader is rested I will engage him
4:25with a sentence of considerable length a
4:26sentence that burns with energy and
4:28builds with all the impotence of a
4:30crescendo the roll of the drums the
4:31crash of the symbols sounds that say
4:33listen to this it is important so write
4:35with a combination of short medium and
4:37long sentences create a sound that
4:39pleases the reader's ear don't just
4:41write words write music you see how when
4:44all the sentences in the same row are
4:45about the same length it creates this
4:47monotonous predictability subconsciously
4:49people get turned off by this this is
4:51what makes them churn to the next video
4:53what you want is to use a variety of
4:55sentences and syllable combinations to
4:57create this unpredictable Rhythm now if
4:59you look at my script document I write
5:01every sentence on a separate line if you
5:03look straight down it'll look like a
5:05jagged edge and that confirms that I'm
5:07using different length sentences next
5:09time you're writing a script try to look
5:10for this if you see your document and
5:12all the sentences seem to end at around
5:14the same point you don't have enough
5:15diversity and it will feel like this
5:17monotonous plotting all right lesson
5:19three is tone the most successful
Tone (Inspired by Steve Jobs, Casey Neistat, Emma Chamberlain)
5:21creators in every discipline are the
5:22ones with the most conversational Tone
5:24It really feels like you're right in the
5:26room with them Emma Chamberlain ascended
5:27to stardom so quickly because she was
5:29naturally amazing at this Casey iats
5:32another one that's really good at this
5:34when you watch his videos and you listen
5:35to him talk it feels like he's right in
5:37the room with you now the person I
5:38learned from most about this was Steve
5:40Jobs if you watch his original keynote
5:42from the first iPhone launch in 2008 he
5:44is amazing at creating this
5:46conversational room like you and him are
5:48just golf buddies shooting the now
5:50this is very intentional and took years
5:52of practice for him to hone in he's also
5:54very gifted at it by doing this Emma
5:56Casey Steve and others are able to break
5:58down that conscious barrier of personal
6:01identity when you watch instead of you
6:03questioning to yourself am I getting
6:05sold to you get out of your own mind and
6:07just feel like you're in a conversation
6:09like you would have to answer a question
6:10that they ask you directly in a way you
6:12forget where you are and that's the
6:14magic of this now I'm still working on
6:15this myself I've only been making
6:17content for like 18 months but if you go
6:18back to my first 50 videos it really
6:20does feel like I'm talking at you
6:22instead of with you the best tactical
6:24way to get better than this other than
6:26just 100 reps is to write and film your
6:29videos as if you're talking to one close
6:31friend if you have to just print out a
6:33picture of them and tape it on the
6:34bottom of your camera lens so you're
6:36literally looking at them as you record
6:38and when you write your scripts make it
6:39so like you're typing a text or
6:41recording an audio note directly to them
6:43over time you'll get better at this
6:45conversational nature but it will feel
6:46like you're having a one-on-one
6:47conversation that's how you break down
6:49this barrier tone is one of those things
6:50that inevitably you will get better over
6:52time the more you film The more you
6:53forget that the camera is just a camera
6:55all right tip number four is Direction
Direction (Inspired by Christopher Nolan)
6:58this may seem counterintuitive but the
6:59best place to start when you're writing
7:00a story is the end figure out what the
7:02end is going to be and then work
7:04backwards from there I like to call the
7:06last line of my script the last dab
7:08because I want it to be so memorable
7:09that if that's all someone heard they'd
7:12be willing to share it with a friend in
7:13short form video especially the video is
7:15designed to Loop so the last line is
7:17actually a setup for the first lines as
7:19it replays I think of this a lot like
7:21baseball the nine hitter is supposed to
7:23set the table for the top of the order
7:25it's the exact same thing with the last
7:27line or two of your video when you're
7:28thinking about how to write the script
7:29script focus on where you want to take
7:31the viewer what do you want to leave
7:32them with what do you want the last
7:33thing they hear to be then you can work
7:35backwards from there and build up that
7:37dance in the middle when I think about
7:38someone that does this super well it's
7:39Christopher Nolan think about his films
7:41tenant Inception Interstellar these are
7:43extremely complicated plot lines that
7:46inevitably he had to work out the end
7:48before he could build up the conflict in
7:50the middle now you're probably not
7:51shooting feature films but this same
7:52logic can be applied to all types of
7:54content usually when I'm writing scripts
7:56I'll write the first and last line I'll
7:58go in between create a bunch of space
8:00and then I'll fill it in that's a good
8:01tactical way to try to get better at
8:02this all right tip number five is a
8:04concept that I call story lenses and
Storylenses (Inspired Taylor Swift)
8:06it's a way to get better at producing
8:08unique content for social media in
8:10today's day and age finding a cool topic
8:12is not enough unless you're super niched
8:14down there's likely dozens of other
8:15people that are talking about that same
8:17topic so how do you differentiate a
8:18story lens is your unique angle or spin
8:21on a particular story imagine a beam of
8:23light the beam of light's coming across
8:25the screen the naked beam everyone looks
8:26at and sees the same thing it's like
8:28this white beam of light but as as soon
8:29as you put a lens or a prism in front of
8:32the light what people see will look
8:33differently than the main beam think of
8:35that prism or that lens as your story
8:38lens it's your unique fingerprint and
8:40how you uniquely tell the story about
8:42that topic let's take an example when
8:44Taylor Swift went to the Super Bowl the
8:46most common lenses would have been to
8:47talk about what she's wearing or when
8:49she's getting there or what her facial
8:51reaction is to something a lot of people
8:53covered those exact same stories a less
8:55common lens would be to talk about a
8:56prediction for what you think might
8:58happen less people would have have that
8:59but an even less common lens would be to
9:01talk about the business impact that she
9:03was driving on the NFL for being at the
9:05game and that's the lens that I chose to
9:07take because I thought I could be a
9:08category of one that's why I ultimately
9:10made this video and it pulled a million
9:12views it was different my story lens was
9:14something unique that people hadn't seen
9:15before all right the last tip number six
The Hook (Inspired by Epic Gardening)
9:17is the hook now I left this for last
9:19because everybody always talks about the
9:21hook first and it makes sense it is very
9:23important if people churn on the hook
9:24the rest of what I talked about doesn't
9:25really matter so I've got two ways to
9:27level up your hooks the first is that
9:28your first line should be as Punchy and
9:31as indicative of the plot as possible if
9:33the video is about your best Garden
9:35techniques the hook should be some
9:36derivative of these are the best Garden
9:38techniques for x or I've got these
9:40Garden techniques or this thing is a
9:42garden technique that you should study
9:43you shouldn't start your hook with some
9:45open opaque line like wait till you see
9:47this or you're never going to believe
9:48this because if the first line doesn't
9:49immediately grab the viewer in short
9:51form video You're Dead the second point
9:53on hooks that's extremely powerful and
9:55something I overlooked for a long time
9:56is that visual hooks are 10 times more
9:59more effective than Audio Only hooks
10:01what does this mean when you're on the
10:02screen and you're saying something but
10:04the only thing the viewer can see is
10:05your mouth moving and maybe the captions
10:07dancing that's going to be way less
10:09effective than if you put a visual on
10:11the screen for them to look and react to
10:13because people's eyes perceive faster
10:15than their ears can hear so you want to
10:17complement what you're saying with a
10:19visual on the screen this is a visual
10:20hook somebody that's really good at this
10:22is my friend Kevin from epic gardening
10:24if you watch his videos he immediately
10:26shows a visual that confirms what what
10:29he's talking about like this one about
10:30strawberries before I hear anything he
10:32says I see a strawberry on the screen
10:34it's Vivid red immediately I know this
10:36video is going to be about strawberries
10:37if I like strawberries I'm going to
10:38stick around to see what he's saying now
10:40I've started testing this and I've
10:41noticed the visual hook aspect has been
10:43super helpful at retaining viewers so in
10:46summary when you're thinking about your
10:47hook get to the point and show while you
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